Oh, God! Not Another Vampire-Romance...

Oh, God! Not Another Vampire-Romance...

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Kayla R. M. By MissFreak Updated Aug 28, 2011

Joline was an ordinary teenager. Until, when she was 18, she was bit by a creeper named Jasper and changed into a vampire! Now during the day she is Sharie, high school student Missisquoi Valley Union High School, and at night she roams the streets as Cherry, the seductive vampire looking for a good meal to sink her teeth into.

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MissFreak MissFreak Aug 28, 2011
I'm thinking of editing this, and adding more detail to draw out the suspense and beauty.
MissFreak MissFreak Aug 28, 2011
Thank you! Yeah, i figured it was a bit fast. I wrote that in ten minutes before I lost my inspiration, and gave into publishing when my sister wouldnt read it unless it was.
PurpleTree PurpleTree Aug 28, 2011
This is different, most vampire stories are about male vampires. Maybe its going too fast? But thats just my opinion. You write well :)