Alas, I Cannot Swim (On Hold)

Alas, I Cannot Swim (On Hold)

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Jane By jeswift711 Updated Nov 26, 2011

How would you react if a mysterious boy offered you freedom to live the adventure of a lifetime? Sela's mother expects nothing less than the perfect child, but her imagination often takes over, resulting in constant abuse and disapproval. What happens when she and her sister accompany the boy? Will she find her sought out freedom, or will she discover that everything is not as it seems?

  • laura
  • marling
jeswift711 jeswift711 Apr 30, 2012
@ElizabethMueller Thank you so much, and for fanning me :D That made my day!
jeswift711 jeswift711 Nov 29, 2011
@Bauhinia Oh my goodness! Thanks so much for your positive feedback! I haven't gotten any excited fans in a while. :D
Bauhinia Bauhinia Nov 29, 2011
Wow! That's all I can think... wow! This is actually so incredible, the way you write, the description, the whole idea, it all works perfectly together. I'm extremely glad I stumbled across this story because I can tell already it will be fantastic, and I'm very excited to see how it progresses!
jeswift711 jeswift711 Nov 27, 2011
@JadedTeen Haha, no biggie take your time. Ah yes, I love Laura Marling. She inspires me :D Oh, believe me, I'm doing exactly the same at the moment. I really need to study :p
Cejay120 Cejay120 Nov 12, 2011
unique plot. good detail and description and i really enjoyed reading this. good chapter
ThePoetryGirl ThePoetryGirl Nov 11, 2011
Wow it is a really original plot. It is interesting and flows really well and easy to read. I loved it plus your grammar is really great!