Challenging Love

Challenging Love

161 Reads 12 Votes 4 Part Story
Maddi By Maddikitty Updated Aug 29, 2011

I held my breath, my legs starting to ache from this crouched position I'd taken and had been in for a while now. 
I waited, watching him. He is a amazingly good looking, even for an unnatural creature of the dark. This is it, my first kill. Going without Taylor had been dangerous and borderline stupid, but it'd be worth it.
That is, until he spoke.  
"I know you're there."

  • fear
  • love
ImissThisx ImissThisx Aug 29, 2011
I think it's a rea;;y good star, and you are good at descriptions, but I don't like the spacing in between the sentences. other then that it was really good.