Crystal Tears

Crystal Tears

669 Reads 26 Votes 6 Part Story
Kimberly By KimberlyDesirae Updated Sep 21, 2012

Jade and her friends think they're going on a pleasant Spring Break vacation, to a place they all know very well, but what they don't know may very well kill them. (Collaboration with KaiteRae.)

  • beau
  • crystal
  • jade
  • kaiterae
  • kimberlydesirae
  • murder
  • myster
  • mystery
  • suspense
  • tears
KIDmimi KIDmimi Oct 04, 2011
Oh I love horrors :D 
                              I love how you've introduced this it's really good :)
MidnightStarz MidnightStarz Sep 07, 2011
Woah this is a really good start to your story. Very intriguing, I like your way of writing.
KimberlyDesirae KimberlyDesirae Sep 05, 2011
@The_Project 
                              
                              The criminal is a person..maybe even 2. but you will never know for sure..till the end :)
RainDancer133 RainDancer133 Sep 05, 2011
Wow, very unique! I liked how you left us with a cliffhanger, and there was some confusion as to what was going on; it makes the reader curious and hooked, wondering as to what's happening next(: You've definitely got a talented and original mind; great job with this! Hope you continue!(:
blakkRose blakkRose Aug 31, 2011
oooh mysterious lol
                              first off i really like your cover but would reccomend making a summary
                              already like the plot and your writing style! keep it up!
kaiterae kaiterae Aug 31, 2011
@jr0127 Yeah, it was posted on my account, too. That's where you voted and commented last time, but Wattpad removed it from my account. I'm still unsure as to why. :/