life goes on

life goes on

488 Reads 25 Votes 8 Part Story
Just call me nikki By Just_nikki Updated Oct 10, 2011

Zombie story!
Morgan just moved from california to georgia. Lifes gotten complicated since the move. Morgan is deprived of her past life and seems indifferent with her new life. Just as things settle there's an out break in new york. Not just any out break it produces zombies. Can Morgan survive as her life drastically changes? Will Morgan's feelings take over?

  • attack
  • bff
  • boyfriend
  • car
  • couple
  • cry
  • dead
  • friends
  • georgia
  • girlfriend
  • james
  • jesse
  • just
  • kids
  • know
  • mccartney
  • morgan
  • parents
  • road
  • shower
  • siblings
  • texas
  • trip
  • zombie
Ravage21 Ravage21 Sep 15, 2011
There was a few errors, but I think once you start getting used to writing the story the kinks will work themselves out. I know my story was kind of confusing in the beginning but the more I wrote the more it began to flow and get better.
PoetryNPurple PoetryNPurple Sep 15, 2011
A few grammar/spelling mistakes hiding in there.  You may want to give it a second look. =)
                              
                              Other than that, very good!  I feel the dialogue could have been more organized, though.  It was sort of scrambled.
                              
                              Overall, good story. =D  Definitely continue it!
aimeaimeaime aimeaimeaime Sep 07, 2011
Wow, this is really descriptive. thats what makes it interesting..  i'm gonna carry on reading. :)
SammyandAlly SammyandAlly Sep 04, 2011
A few mistakes here and there but DEFINITELY nothing major!:D Its a bit confusing at times but I love how u made zombies seem like they were actually real! gives the story interest.
imalreadytorn imalreadytorn Aug 30, 2011
Agreed, it is all a bit fast maybe, but i think its good still :) keep writing xD
                              
                              jessie <3