First Time I Met...  (REediting it)

First Time I Met... (REediting it)

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Yaz M. A. By ymarocks Completed

Jessica's stepfather has been always abusive to her and even selling illegal drugs. Jessica doesn't want to report him 'till she turns the proper age, a free adult. But when one day she couldn't control it anymore, she turns him in instead. When Officer Simon helps her, they both easily falls in love with each other. Simon starts to remember who she was. He knows her from the club of 21 & Over. That was the First Time He Met...[[Perfect Song: Two is Better than One by BoysLikeGirls]]

  • abuse
  • adult
  • cop
  • eighteen
  • love
Xxiana Xxiana Sep 06, 2011
I like your story. There are some sentences that could've used a comma instead of a period but it was really interesting. I also like the fact that you started off in a male point of view. Many stories would start with a females but it's nice to see a change.