I was popular...

I was popular...

475 Reads 17 Votes 3 Part Story
Bethsy By wolves_rock_75 Updated Oct 23, 2011

Alexander is your typical  popular boy that has every thing he wants but isn't totally happy. Starlight is your normal girl that has to work hard to get everything but is in peace,complete or at lest that is what she thinks. What happens when he looses his popularity because of an old accusation, which isn't even true? She out of sympathy helps him? What will they do when they fall in love with each other. What happens when they discover that they are not what they thought, and there lives are just big lies. When they learn they are mortal enemies and are defying laws by being together. Will they fight for their love or will they just give up and loose each other? Read and find out what happens...

wolves_rock_75 wolves_rock_75 Sep 27, 2011
@Danaxlouise That is what I have been trying @ do but I get no responce after a while so I decided trying with other writesr but that they were good at it meaning they had experience.
Danaeble Danaeble Sep 27, 2011
@wolves_rock_75 ooh, well that's cool(: Maybe you should look into an editor
wolves_rock_75 wolves_rock_75 Sep 27, 2011
@Danaxlouise Yeah the spelling and grammar errors it may be explained because I was born and live in Puerto Rico and I am only almost 13....
Danaeble Danaeble Sep 27, 2011
There are some spelling/grammar errors. & you used the wrong tense a couple times for 'throw'. Also, when you're describing a person try not to just list of things. Make it like, 'I looked in the mirror messing up my dark brown hair...blahblahblah' stuff like that.
CromwellGuardPrinces CromwellGuardPrinces Sep 15, 2011
thnx for the dedication gurlll!!! great! canta wait for more!
wolves_rock_75 wolves_rock_75 Sep 15, 2011
@xXMacaroonGirl147Xx  Thanks a lot I'll try and fix those mistakes.