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Presurgent (FourTris)

Presurgent (FourTris)

44K Reads 1.7K Votes 33 Part Story
SHAWN MENDES!! By shawnfrknmendes Completed

@fourtrisismybea best after allegiance story I have ever read. I've read over 40

@phildanup reading this book was so refreshing. I love it so much 

@ficti0nal_characters ok when I say this I really do mean it, I found your story and it was the best I've ever read. I applaud you for this amazing story

"Beatrice Prior will you Marry me?" He says with his eyebrow raised and his handsome insistent eyes peering at me.

I blink away my tears and stand up "I thought you'd never ask" I say and the tone of my voice changes to a tone that I've never spoken in before. He stands up and he smiles wider than I've ever seen him smile in my life. He slips the beautiful diamond ring on my finger and I throw my hands around him. "I love you" I say my voice cracks and I cry happy tears for the first time in my life. I cry and laugh at the same time and I don't let go of Tobias. "I love you too" he says holding me tightly. 
This is how happiness feels like and I love it.

I hear u sister! I don't think any of the decent peeps who read it could! :P
I didn't sleep 4(hehe four) a week, I was reading furiously for three days to find out she dies and then I read it over and over, hoping I missed something!
phildanup phildanup Dec 06, 2015
so proud of you babe- this book is really good and i'm not just saying that because i love you!
JasmineVoosen JasmineVoosen Nov 02, 2015
Looking forward to seeing where you can take the story!!!  ;)