Blessing Book 1 Of The Child Of The Damned Series

Blessing Book 1 Of The Child Of The Damned Series

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shaddowqueen By shaddowqueen Updated Aug 25, 2015

Vania is an eighteen year old girl who doesn't know anything about herself or her parents she never had a chance to.

 She's been around a lot of different foster homes but all that changes when she meets Kaze he's completely different from anyone she's ever met.

 Can she save her dying race from a time of darkness?

Will Kaze turn his back on his family his entire world?

Or will Vania die?

SilentStormShadow SilentStormShadow Apr 23, 2012
Girl, PERIODS! Either these are very long sentences you're writing, or English is not your native language. I wish I could read it, but I'd like to read it properly.
                              I know I shouldn't post anything 'negative' about the story as per guidelines, but entire paragraphs are a single run-on sentences.
KadgeY KadgeY Feb 26, 2011
this is awesome! (think u could check mine out? finding myself the story of damon sprite)
                              Loved the main characters bad-ass do wat u want attitude. Totally relate (lol)
shaddowqueen shaddowqueen Jan 18, 2011
@The_Honest_Critic thanks so much you've helped so much i gonna do a re-write so i will take it all in to consideration i know im a terriable speller as you can tell thanks again ;€
shaddowqueen shaddowqueen Nov 18, 2010
wuld luv some feedback as i will be taken this down soon loads of editing and maybe a compleate re-write soo any kind of help will do thanks if you want me to read and vote on yours then leave the name here and i will get straight on it as i love reading its all i do lol thanks x