Naruto was neglected by his parents. Just because his twin sisters got the Kyuubi's chakra. He will rise from the neglection and unlock the most powerful doujutsu on the Element Nations. Rinne-Sharingan Naruto. Naruto x Sayuri(Fem Sasuke) x HAREM.
Grammar is a mans best friend. In order to write well, one must learn from reading good writings.
Story is good, though it escalated fast lol, I didn't even know what was happening at certain points. Very good though.
Her name literally has yuri in it.....and you say she's innocent.
Finally the bitch parents realize how bad they treated naruto , good story so far
*anime tears of joy* My Gosh! First story that IS ALREADY PERFECT. After first chapter. Maah, y're a freakin' genius! C:
Uh, hope this will encourage you to keep writing stuff. // Extremely sorry for any errors. ;)
*anime cries not wanting naru to turn into a major pervert like kakashi before smacking Itachi and Shisui on the back of their heads* They won't be doing anything yet...