.: Longing to be free :.

.: Longing to be free :.

1.2K Reads 84 Votes 3 Part Story
destinyrhymes By destinyrhymes Updated Sep 15, 2011

The anger pushed them to protest and speak their minds, but it soon turned them into "prisoners of conscience". This story is about brave college students and their journey to the darkest prison there is … silencing their minds and voices and forcing them to pay for their courage. A ruling king that plays with souls as chess pieces … a royal family that their hands are soaked in people's warm blood.
This story is for all of those who are longing for freedom.

  • bahrain
  • brave
  • eygpt
  • free
  • freedom
  • jail
  • libya
  • longing
  • pain
  • prison
  • protest
  • revolution
  • strong
  • torture
  • war
  • yemen
aBitParanoid aBitParanoid Sep 19, 2011
I really really love the plot! Congratulations on that :)
                              however, I did see some spelling errors as well as punctuation. 
                              Good luck on this story, it has great potential :D
Redribbons Redribbons Sep 18, 2011
This isn't my usual genra but it's really inspirational! I love the way that you write and the description you use :) Definatly going to be reading more :D
BOOKIE14 BOOKIE14 Sep 17, 2011
I like it. it sound like like it was wrote fom write out of a movie.... I think that made sense. It's really detailed and I like how it was in 3 person so you could get the feel of things. You couls picture everything that was happening. 
                              
                              Keep up the good work :)
- - Sep 17, 2011
Pretty good. Not many are brave enough to write about this type of subject, so well done for that alone. Also well written and everything. I'm also interested in the whole subject involving the current afairs in the middle east, so its nice to read about it, its refreshing :)
tabidesu tabidesu Sep 17, 2011
I love how you got inspiration to write this story, you can really see how terrible the king is.  I hope they can overcome him, and I'm curious as to who Mona is.
ShaneChowdery ShaneChowdery Sep 17, 2011
This is interesting...the story's presentation is unique and the story itself is exciting and extremely well written. Voted.