SayGoodbye

SayGoodbye

95 Reads 5 Votes 1 Part Story
Dory ^.^ By SatanSatanSatan Updated Aug 27, 2011

Alice is a teenage girl that is frequently beaten by her parents Melissa and Henri. She will escape destructed path and feel the warm embrace of freedom. Alice is special, and she must learn how to understand her gift. Will she live freely or die miserably trying to escape?

  • abuse
  • alice
  • magic
  • runaway
  • scared
  • witch
DestinyBree2013 DestinyBree2013 Nov 11, 2011
This is very good, I love it! please write more, if you can. but i must ask, what is a Wendigo??
EzraWinn EzraWinn Sep 12, 2011
interesting kinda dark i think but i like that well written and kept my attention ur summary was what made me first want to read more n then u didnt disappoint i know some ppl said it was sad but i think he has to be sad she is being a abused right either way great start
_Nostalgia_ _Nostalgia_ Sep 10, 2011
That was.... for lack of a better word, cool at the end! And though the beginning was very... :'(    yes sad, I think it will be a very good story :P just a couple mistakes too, very good. <3<3<3
SatanSatanSatan SatanSatanSatan Aug 29, 2011
@halfbloodprincess68 thank u i feel comfortable writing under the characters Alice and Aaron(main protagonist in my story Into The Darkness)