Keeping up with 'Spain' in Spain.

Keeping up with 'Spain' in Spain.

892 Reads 30 Votes 4 Part Story
<3 Fev <3 By Fev_14 Updated Oct 25, 2011

Will Spain swoon Anastasia over with his flirtatious charm... or her witty and devious mind that can't help think he is just another jerk ?

  • adventure
  • anastasia
  • cute
  • romance
  • spain
Fev_14 Fev_14 Aug 27, 2011
@jr0127 thankyou so much for you advice, ill take some up on them (:
Fev_14 Fev_14 Aug 27, 2011
@overandabovethestars, @IBreakHearts , @AriaRose13 , @loverofwriter88 thankyou guys so much for the feedback (:
AriaRose13 AriaRose13 Aug 27, 2011
Very Interesting and I wonder if the sranger is the one who called her?
overandabovethestars overandabovethestars Aug 27, 2011
Interesting title. :) Also, the name Anastasia drew my attention at once. :)
                              I suggest you space your characters' dialogues more, so that it doesn't seem too clumped and forced. Also, indent your paragraphs. :)
                              
                              Other than that, the ending was quite intriguing. :)