Don't You Want Me?

Don't You Want Me?

832 Reads 31 Votes 3 Part Story
Crystal By NeonCrystal Updated Mar 09, 2012

Raine's life changes when Tyler Anderson, the hottest new hollywood obsession, offers her a role in his new movie.

Somewhere along the way sparks fly and they fall in love.

Happily ever after right?





But Raine has other plans.

~~Neon and Crystal

  • actor
  • anderson
  • audition
  • bar
  • dont
  • movie
  • raine
  • steve
  • tyler
  • want
downandnotout downandnotout Mar 09, 2012
Oh wow, this is really intresting. I like the amount of detail used, it makes it all seem more real! :)
Nerali Nerali Oct 15, 2011
The Bar. Of course, dahhhlings, come to The Bar. It's a bar, did you know? Oh dahlings, you never would have guessed that The Bar is actually a bar! ahahahha maybe to improve it you could take out like one of the 'the one who' when shes talking about Tyler Anderson, but other than that its good
mealle mealle Sep 28, 2011
I love this idea! the way you have written everything is amazing, you have a talent. Good chapter :)
kkwxxx kkwxxx Sep 20, 2011
do carry on with the story!!! cant wait to see how it turns out this sounds really promising!! btw my name's krystal too!!! but spelt with a k(: gambatte!
NeonCrystal NeonCrystal Sep 20, 2011
@ErinMarieArmsey Thank youu :) and yeah it is supposed to be cry thanks for spotting that, fixing it right now :D
AutumnFireflyx AutumnFireflyx Sep 19, 2011
this is really good carry on....btw please check mine out it would mean a lot