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Burden to bare

Burden to bare

3.3K Reads 98 Votes 10 Part Story
Jad By jaddadaddadingbat Updated May 08, 2011

Reb has a longing for her lost family, and being torn apart from them by death has caused more than just a new life style. After confronting in a boy, Jack, who understands every move she makes, Reb discovers the truth and lies of what happened to her mum and older brother, carrying the weight of her part in it with her for as long as she remembers.

Jeiry29 Jeiry29 May 23, 2011
Awesomee. ii Cnt handlee Mysteryy ihs It Too Scaryy ? Lol. But t's n awesomee Beggining ! && Sorryy iii Ghot Yer Messaqee Latee. :)
Tazmin-p Tazmin-p Apr 02, 2011
I think it's totally awesome I will read every single page  keep at it :)
bridgettec_ bridgettec_ Feb 26, 2011
Wow, first let me say that was really interesting. It left me wanting more. 
                              Great start!! Keep up the great work, i"ll be reading =D
RamirezCindy RamirezCindy Feb 25, 2011
@jaddadaddadingbat haha. Yeah, I though that. 
                              Hey, I notice you have more readers! That's awesome!
                              Good Luck! (:
jaddadaddadingbat jaddadaddadingbat Feb 24, 2011
@LiveLoveLaugh23 okay, i'll put more up soon :) i'm already writing chapter 9!! :D
CallMeIndependent CallMeIndependent Feb 24, 2011
I really like this :D It's a brilliant way to start a story :)