Sorry, I Don't Believe in True Love

Sorry, I Don't Believe in True Love

380 Reads 14 Votes 1 Part Story
Rose By Addaline Updated Oct 12, 2010

      Avery Darling is having a rough time. Her parents have just divorced, and the custody arrangement sucks. She lives with her dad because her mom decided to move to California. She sees her mom during the holidays. 
      When Adrien shows up at her uncle's skating rink needing a place to stay, Avery can't bring herself to say no. But as she gets to know Adrien, she's not so sure she made the right desicion...or is his jerk-ish-ness just a mask for something more vulnerable? 
      Friendships will be tested and boundries WILL be crossed as Avery tries to sort out her helluva-crazy life. 

[Kay I will make the description better later, but I'm still messing around with a few ideas... ;) ]

vballlexi14 vballlexi14 Dec 22, 2010
@YouAteMyWaffle Well then, thanks for clearing that up for me. Haha :) 
Just_Laugh Just_Laugh Dec 22, 2010
@vballlexi14 Ok, Im not completely sure, but I think the little star things like *I* means that you're actually 'doing' something, such as... *Gives you a cookie* and that would mean that you're 'giving' them a cookie :) I don't actually know though :) lol! 
vballlexi14 vballlexi14 Oct 15, 2010
I really like your story only I don't get the star things, like *I*, other than that this story was incredible! Awesome job!
                              -lexi
bookzlyfesurvival bookzlyfesurvival Oct 14, 2010
hey i liked it !!! can u upload faster ????????? PLZZZZZZZZZZ
SkyeJC SkyeJC Oct 13, 2010
The third person thing is difficult to write and I think you pulled it off :)
                              I don't get why you put thing between astrix .. like "*has*" .. is that for bold?
                              
                              Its a great story and you explained a lot in the first chapter :)
                              
                              I'm voting and fanning!!
Addaline Addaline Oct 13, 2010
@KatheRiNe7 Oh wow, thanks! :) It means a lot. I'll probably update twice a week... 
                              thanks xD