Bengal

Bengal

629 Reads 47 Votes 2 Part Story
Emily Galli By ohgeeitsemily Updated Aug 28, 2011

What can you say about a girl on the run? That they are alone? That they have no one? It’s all true. I am alone. It’s hard for me to remember a time when I wasn’t. I prefer solitude. Having people in your life just causes you pain. Being alone gives you time to forget.

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MsMadness MsMadness Sep 04, 2011
This is really great for the prologue. It makes me wonder... Just one question, though.. Is Bengal a place?
WhoAteMyCookie WhoAteMyCookie Sep 04, 2011
This is amazing! It's original too! I'm definitely going to keep reading! I didn't see any grammar, punctuation or spelling errors, it flowed nicely and caught my eye in the first sentence! Great job(:
whiplock whiplock Sep 04, 2011
This is actually a very intriguing prologue. Your use of rhetorical questions build suspension, and the mysterious demeanour gives away things, without really doing so. Great job!
NeverHaveIEver NeverHaveIEver Aug 30, 2011
WOW! this is really good:) its very well written and the cover is really well made
izzybelleraine izzybelleraine Aug 30, 2011
At first I was thinking that this was a really short chapter. Then I realized it was just a prologue. This is very mysterious and thought-inducing. It really makes the reader wonder. 
                              
                              Which is why I voted and I'm reading on!
                              
                              P.S. The cover is fantastic!!!
nolookingback nolookingback Aug 30, 2011
I think it's really filled with some kind of powerful emotion, it just makes it interesting! Voting!