Three Charm Bracelets

Three Charm Bracelets

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BooksRMyLife By BooksRMyLife Updated Sep 21, 2011

Tori Gamrin, Olivia Jakob, and Maria Alton were best friends as younger children. When high school comes, Maria starts to hang out with a new group of people. The popular crowd willingly accepts her to become one of them. Maria decides there's no looking looking back and blows off her former best friends. When shocking news about her comes out everyone is amazed. Olivia meets a guy at a party who she thinks is The One, but Tori thinks it is all nonsense. On top of friend drama, Tori meets a guy on the web who seems perfect for her and Olivia thinks it's the same thing Tori thought about her relationship, nonsense. Trying to juggle all of these problems with two hands is almost impossible. But with the help of all of them together, who all wear the same charm bracelets, can they get through everything, and maybe reunite with the wandering friend who left them for a life of glamour?

bobbelcher bobbelcher Nov 04, 2012
@BooksRMyLife No problem! If you critique The Elevator Game, though, you have to fan me first, because the first chapter was made private by Wattpad.
BooksRMyLife BooksRMyLife Nov 04, 2012
@IsabellaManzo It was because Maria e-mailed her back. Thank you for the critiquing. I found it very helpful and I'm going to change the mistakes.
bobbelcher bobbelcher Nov 02, 2012
@IsabellaManzo one more thing, you said that Tori had five messages at home, when Maria e-mailed her. (I think) Tori checked her phone at the store, and had five messages again. Was that because Maria e-mailed her back, or Tori skim through the other messages and get five more?
tracydee18 tracydee18 Sep 05, 2011
i love how you have an equal amount of descriptions to dialogue. 
                              awesome job.