Reaching Verla

Reaching Verla

496 Reads 33 Votes 12 Part Story
Rasinel By nolookingback Updated Sep 07, 2011

Dawn Marks has woken up in a world by the name of Yeni. She has lost her memory, and now, she has been chosen, along with a couple of other people, to explore the world Verla, which used to be known as Earth. But when they get there, they learn that their mission was not what they thought. "Now i know why they never come back." Get ready for an adventure

nolookingback nolookingback Aug 30, 2011
The story get's different by chapter 1 people! please be able to read :D
vengefulkarma vengefulkarma Aug 30, 2011
I live the originality of this :DD this really looks interesting with the OPC project 
                              
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kim2495 kim2495 Aug 30, 2011
i read it and it sounds weird but interesting and i wanna read more lol :P really good though :) oh and btw apples :)
pr3ttykittycat pr3ttykittycat Aug 30, 2011
Holy wow. This is probably one of the most original stories I've read on here. Very well done, I enjoyed it a lot.
Gorillo1 Gorillo1 Aug 30, 2011
You story idea was unique but it was lacking in a couple of fields maybe get an editor apples
mealle mealle Aug 30, 2011
I I love this unique idea, and how you explained what is happening. I found some of it a bit bland but overall it is a good start to a prologue.  Great job!