Taken away FINALLY!!

Taken away FINALLY!!

415 Reads 10 Votes 4 Part Story
Jaime By xJaimebellx Updated Sep 04, 2011

I smile everyday at school. But when it comes to home it is a whole other story. I have the deadliest parents and i can not do anything about it. But when my dad tries to kill me i leave and go to an orphanage. I am about there for three whole days, but when a young couple come and adopt me i cant wait to leave. But this family is different. Did i just walk into something deadly? Will i live till 18? and worst of all will i ever find true love? This is my story.

xJaimebellx xJaimebellx Aug 28, 2011
@lesley105 Thanks and i am glad you are happy i dedicated it to you. That is now i was aiming her parents to be :)
lesley105 lesley105 Aug 28, 2011
Great chapter and thanks for dedicating it to me *I'm blushing ;))* 
                              Gosh her parents are A class jerks!
xJaimebellx xJaimebellx Aug 28, 2011
@wolfthing101 thanks for your comment :) will be continuing soon
xJaimebellx xJaimebellx Aug 27, 2011
@lesley105 Thanks for your comment it means a lot to me that you have faith that it would be a great story.
                              Thanks again <3
lesley105 lesley105 Aug 27, 2011
It's a lot like the movie raise your voice. I'm sad her brother died:( 
                              There's a lot of mistakes but I have faith in you that this will be a great story! I loved the beginning. :)
                              
                              You're a great writer and I feel privileged to read your story<3 
                              
                              ( I's are always meant to be capitalized )