me know (rap)

me know (rap)

39 Reads 2 Votes 1 Part Story
josh woodward By pokler1305 Completed

im over it

  • ache
  • back
  • heart
  • know
  • love
  • ownage
  • rap
  • try
WillYouStillLoveMe WillYouStillLoveMe Aug 29, 2011
@pokler1305 Oh ok :) Well I type slow so yeah haha 
                              But yeah you do have talent just got to work hard :)
pokler1305 pokler1305 Aug 29, 2011
@dhampirluv no its ok i need proper feedback i type fast so will tend to sort of muddle stuff up
WillYouStillLoveMe WillYouStillLoveMe Aug 29, 2011
@pokler1305 They are getting better just pick maybe better word choice and make sure when you type them space it as if you're rapping them because sometimes I have to re-read to make sure I'm reading it right. I like them though:) 
                              
                              I'm the type that picks at the little stuff sorry lol
pokler1305 pokler1305 Aug 29, 2011
@dhampirluv  do you think there getting better 
                              or getting old
WillYouStillLoveMe WillYouStillLoveMe Aug 27, 2011
Wow Haha sorry but that one line about "the best time...." was speechless!
                              This was really good, keep your head up because this right here is great work and I know I want to see more :)