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Be mine {Completed}

Be mine {Completed}

705K Reads 35K Votes 32 Part Story
Kiran Hafeez By kiranhafeez Completed

I opened my eyes to see her.She was sitting on the floor.Moonlight was making her face shine.Her eyes were teary making my heart hurt.She took deep breath and opened her hairs,and placed them on one shoulder.My heart skip its beats.

She took my breath away.She was looking so beautiful that I couldn't remove my eyes from her.She turn to see me and I closed my eyes to show her that I was sleeping.

I opened my eyes after a while and fixed my eyes on her.Her tears were rolling down on her cheeks.I was feeling my heart hurting seeing her like this.

"you are responsible for theses tears,she's crying because you hurt her." My conscience shake me and I felt the guilt inside me.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Meet zeeniya a girl who is unwanted to everyone specially to her parents.No one loves her.What happened when She got married to a person who was not interested in her??He was trapped to marry her in order to save his sister's marriage.

Be with zeeniya in her journey of her life..

We can't hate or blame to anyone for there skin colour...we don't have any right yo judge a person by there his or her beauty...
musicfree10 musicfree10 Mar 27
Wale kums salam your story well beginning for now good Nd detailed
superb_zari superb_zari Nov 02, 2016
Was just reading our Arrange Marriage when I noticed that below the title it was written sequel to mine *I forgot the name 😁😁😁* stupid me.
ambooahmed ambooahmed Oct 13, 2016
I really like prologue it's amazing u write so beautiful and about this it's quote unreal but bitter truth girls survive about this but her parents sick
Lopexan Lopexan Oct 10, 2016
i gat a feeling this story is gona be interesting....Am smiling already.
heno_hj heno_hj Dec 08, 2016
I didn't understand , you mean because the color of her skin is black???