The Nerd Can Fight

The Nerd Can Fight

20.6K Reads 615 Votes 7 Part Story
bobzhouse By bobzhouse Updated Dec 04, 2015

This is a totally class cliche story about an undercover fighter in highschool.

Anitode Anitode Jun 02
It was fine but my friend was thinking about the punctuation can improve
Jumper0804 Jumper0804 Jul 30
That wasn't terrible u r a really good so if people want to be bitches then screw them
After every time I write a sentence with dialogue u shouldn't write said and u will spice it up and give ur characters a little more emotion
Again this was great you writing is not terrible at all dont bring yourself down
Zanthode Zanthode Feb 02
Stop being so nervous about your story 
                              I good as long as it goes well 'n' u update
LadyZeus1860 LadyZeus1860 Nov 21, 2015
Hmm....  *uses the little brains I got* ...ok, got an insult for the 'bad boy' to say to her.
                              
                              'No one wants you here, your weak and pathetic'
                              'Aw, is the wittle nerd gonna cry?'
                              'Thats right, go run to your mommy!'