This is a totally class cliche story about an undercover fighter in highschool.
It was fine but my friend was thinking about the punctuation can improve
That wasn't terrible u r a really good so if people want to be bitches then screw them
After every time I write a sentence with dialogue u shouldn't write said and u will spice it up and give ur characters a little more emotion
Again this was great you writing is not terrible at all dont bring yourself down
It was.. way better then mines.. since I suck and you don't.. so we won't hate on your spelling or sum s.hizz
It was near terrible... hahah nah.. it was way better then me 😂😂 keep going it's a good book 😏