I Crave My Savior  #Wattys2016

I Crave My Savior #Wattys2016

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starhavens By starhavens Updated Nov 02, 2016

◉   E l l e n  ◉ 

"How can you be so positive, after being through all those nightmares?"She needed an answer to keep herself sane.

"I have found my ray of sunshine, my personal fire, which melt away my darkness with her ever burning glow." He murmurs softly, while watching her with smiling eyes.

Never in a thousand years, Ellen would have ever guessed, her life will going to be flipping around after a mysterious surprise. 

Living on her own terms for nearly a decade, leave her perplex when she can't seem to help but change every belief she had after meeting a not so ordinary man.


◉  E r i c  ◉ 

"You shouldn't be in darkness, just because I am." He tries to make her leave his side as everyone does without his consent.

"I think, I have found my reason for staying, right here." she walks over and sit next to him. 

"Will you hold my hand; we'll rock away the time."She slides her hand in his and squeezed the sadness away.

Everyone in Eric's life has crumbled his trust in an irreparable way, but some amber eyes are giving him every reason to have faith in them. 

He has no idea what to do, neglect the dangerous aura screaming around her or go with his familiar instinct. 


Sometimes you have to risk everything you have for the one who deserve the happiness.

Cover by @nightgate

Edit by @jgfairytales

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squirrelgirl2341 squirrelgirl2341 Jul 02, 2016
Why did he get fired if he's valuable? Is this cleared up later on? Or is Ellen trying to show her power by doing this? Just a little confused but all of it seems interesting!
squirrelgirl2341 squirrelgirl2341 Jul 02, 2016
This section is a little confusing. Just reword it and you'll be good!
squirrelgirl2341 squirrelgirl2341 Jul 02, 2016
Sad 😢😢 Great job on making the reader feel this emotion, it tugged at my heart.
Authentic_poesy Authentic_poesy Aug 06, 2016
Hmm, I think you need to lessen those curse words ^_^ use it when needed only. Or better yet, use a word like 'damn' etc.To make it more pleasing in our ears. :D But all in all I must say, that you've done a great start;D Can't wait to read more from your story.^~^
squirrelgirl2341 squirrelgirl2341 Jul 02, 2016
I love the description in this! It seems like it's in a little bit of an awkward place though. I would try weaving in this information in other parts of the book. It's great stuff! It just isn't in the right place.
squirrelgirl2341 squirrelgirl2341 Jul 02, 2016
That sounds like a pretty good plan B haha I like the little bits of humor in this, keep it up!