Life as a "Queer" [Editing]

Life as a "Queer" [Editing]

7.5K Reads 97 Votes 10 Part Story
Mikey Roulette By KillEmAll666 Updated Aug 27, 2011

In the process of being edited and adding new chapters. :/

KillEmAll666 KillEmAll666 Feb 22, 2011
@LoveYouMe If you'd like, you can edit for me and what not? 
                              
                              @frakkevin Well I'm working on more eventful chapters just for your entertainment danna -_- 
YellowCottonHat YellowCottonHat Dec 15, 2010
This is interesting in that I want to know what happens next, but I think you need to work on tenses.. like for example you might have "He jumped" at one point and then "She says" at the other. It doesn't flow... You know? 
                              xD
KAFrak KAFrak Dec 05, 2010
The writing is good, but nothing eventful happens. This is the first chapter, it has to be awesome and want people to read more. I must admit, it's harder to do with a drama, so I'll cut you some slack
KillEmAll666 KillEmAll666 Nov 17, 2010
@HisLastWords Thanks! By the way I love your story.
                                                                                                                          - Cas