This is incredible...there's so much imagery and description and feeling in this.
you dont know how this poem is almost base on my life! i love it!!
Very strong words, and a fantastic poem. Keep them coming. =]
Wow. I love the style if your writing! The methaphors were indeed brilliant!
WOW!! This is brilliant!! The metaphors you've used and the anologies with nature are beautiful!! This is defintely one of your best!!
You've described deep emotions with just a few words.
Simply love it (: