Unblooded

Unblooded

22.8K Reads 1.2K Votes 21 Part Story
Onyx-98 By Onyx-98 Updated Mar 15

Elise Dwight was only nine years old when a Yaujta Predator, ship landed on her family's farm. Her parents left to seek out the threat but did not return, so she takes matters into her own hands. 
 
Elder Gwan-thwei and his elites landed on the farm to hunt down a suspected Badblood, a predator who no longer follows the honorable ways of the hunt. What he does not realize is that Elise is hunting as well, and she will prove herself to be the better hunter.


I am not very good at descriptions but it would warm my cold heart greatly if you give it a shot.

  • elise
  • hunter
  • hybrid
  • outcast
  • predator
  • sciencefiction
  • trial-by-fire
  • trial-by-pain
  • unknownworld
  • yautja
ShaunPierre ShaunPierre Jun 28, 2017
Very bold and lucid descriptions. A painting more like, and I am seeing all of the visuals. Great writing style. You have a voice.
Annaz1261 Annaz1261 Jun 23, 2017
I like ur story so far... And I also used the same cover as you did for my book. I didn't know I copied until now. You write everything the way that I want to write, but I don't have as much vocabulary and I'm only in middle school. I'm gonna keep reading now.
ernestpazera ernestpazera Oct 25, 2016
I have a five year old. This makes it difficult for me to suspend disbelief. May I suggest 8? Even 7?
Onyx-98 Onyx-98 Oct 25, 2016
It is going to come into play later. Elise isn't what you would expect. There are things that her parents did not tell her. I can't exactly explain without giving something away.