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Scars Don't fade (Niall horan fanfic)

Scars Don't fade (Niall horan fanfic)

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ash_musicd601 By ash_musicd601 Updated Jul 10

Jessica Della has always had a hard life her father abused her then left and her boyfriend was abusive. A tragic accident leaves her homeless, and she goes to England to live with a uncle she didn't know she had. She meets one direction, and her friendship with them grows. She feels like she's falling in love, but do things like that happen? She keeps asking herself.

Cobalt_Jay Cobalt_Jay Jul 14
"He was- I guess Louis was his name- pulled away from me." When you have a broken sentence like that that's interrupted by something, the best way to punctuate it without confusing your readers is to put either commas, a semicolon, or hyphens around the interrupting segment.
Cobalt_Jay Cobalt_Jay Jul 14
Wouldn't it be five? She met Louis, Harry, Niall, and Liam. Plus this is her uncle's house so he would be there too. Assuming she isn't going to meet Zayn, that's five boys. Six if she meets Zayn.
Cobalt_Jay Cobalt_Jay Jul 14
Why wouldn't she know the name of her uncle that she's coming to live with, and was aware enough to know who Louis was talking about when he announced Simon's arrival?
tigez13 tigez13 Aug 22, 2016
Horrible Ashley this book is amazing please keep up the good work its really good :)
rrs1489lovesNiall1D rrs1489lovesNiall1D Sep 26, 2016
Sounds interesting. And I can relate to being quiet and liking Niall. :)
gtjeutk1 gtjeutk1 Nov 21, 2015
I love the color orange too. This is a really nice start, keep on writing