Iron and Wood #Wattys2016

Iron and Wood #Wattys2016

61.4K Reads 2.7K Votes 34 Part Story
JD Brandon By ninedaysqueen Completed

Shal has had her future laid out for her for as long as she can remember.  Cursed with vampirism and trained as a killer, she has accepted her fate as an enforcer for the Empire.  Escape has never seemed possible until now, when an opportunity arises in the form of a fragile young woman chosen to die in a dark ceremony. They may make it to the woods, but it's miles of wild territory to uncertain safety, and the Imperial trackers are always following...

Cover by @Silver_Chick

SoWhat_If SoWhat_If Aug 31
Like it too soft. I like it a little rough, not too much, but maybe just enough. (sorry I had to)
xtranquilx xtranquilx Dec 27, 2015
This was a really good first chapter. I loved  the way you described things because it made it easier to imaging things for the readers. 
                              Shal's character seems really interesting and her struggle with what she has to do is visible. It all makes me want to continue reading.
HippieOfTheYear HippieOfTheYear Dec 17, 2015
I love the length of this chapter and the information given! Not too much, just the right amount. So many stories have information dumps in the first chapter but you have left me intrigued.
Wimbug Wimbug Dec 16, 2015
I feel like your description of the characters was too direct and feels like telling. Maybe try to incorporate it in action or dialogue or state it a bit more discreetly :)
Hug_Me_BrothaXD Hug_Me_BrothaXD Dec 14, 2015
This a little short, but very well written. You especially at the end, with the "let's go" comment will make the readers more curious what is going to happen! It's really good!!
SerenityR0se SerenityR0se Dec 12, 2015
I like your writing. It is very descriptive and pulls me right in.