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Iron and Wood #Wattys2016

Iron and Wood #Wattys2016

78.7K Reads 3.6K Votes 34 Part Story
JD Brandon By ninedaysqueen Completed

Shal has had her future laid out for her for as long as she can remember.  Cursed with vampirism and trained as a killer, she has accepted her fate as an enforcer for the Empire.  Escape has never seemed possible until now, when an opportunity arises in the form of a fragile young woman chosen to die in a dark ceremony. They may make it to the woods, but it's miles of wild territory to uncertain safety, and the Imperial trackers are always following...
  Cover by @Silver_Chick

I start to see the light at the end of the tunnel in this chapter .and get to know a bit more about Shal. So excited to read the rest .
I don't know why this chapter reminds me of game of thrones ,specially the beginning of it. I really liked the description ,the dark image and sensation in this chapter  .
SoWhat_If SoWhat_If Aug 31, 2016
Like it too soft. I like it a little rough, not too much, but maybe just enough. (sorry I had to)
Wow. First paragraph and already I have every faith in your writing. This is wonderful. A bit confusing, but I think that is because first chapters are always confusing. 😄
xtranquilx xtranquilx Dec 27, 2015
This chapter was really good and it had me interested in the plot of the story. 
                              The current situation that Shal was in was sad and it wasn't ideal. I'm glad she decided to escape but I hope she flees with Ella successfully.
xtranquilx xtranquilx Dec 27, 2015
This was a really good first chapter. I loved  the way you described things because it made it easier to imaging things for the readers. 
                              Shal's character seems really interesting and her struggle with what she has to do is visible. It all makes me want to continue reading.