ABC (Anything But Clothes)

ABC (Anything But Clothes)

13.9K Reads 121 Votes 10 Part Story
Elsie By Sugardoll Completed

A story about a suspended girl, an evil stepmother, the time of her life, and ABC parties..!!!... 

TheRed_Chevelle TheRed_Chevelle Nov 19, 2010
i really like it!!! ummm...but wat r debits????  sorry if i dnt kw just wonderin.... nd dont make fun!!!!
Darkphoenixelias Darkphoenixelias Nov 04, 2010
the first part was hilarious
                              but the plot building at the end really got me
Hello_Freaks Hello_Freaks Oct 29, 2010
I really like it:) W-o-w. Like everyone who posted on that discussion was talented. Anyways Im gonna hope u read my friends story...Her name is LamerThanYou
-teardrops- -teardrops- Oct 24, 2010
:)
                              this is cool! :D
                              the begining kinda reminds me of a day I had :/
                              ahahaha but tis IS GREATTT!!!!
                              
Audrey01 Audrey01 Oct 24, 2010
i like the start, but it was too many one-liners. try to squeeze things into paragraphs..
                              
                              other than that, it is a fun read.
                              
                              Keep writing.
Sugardoll Sugardoll Oct 23, 2010
Thanks, thanks and thanks Dragonspirit12 and kissalisious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!