A New Hope (Modern! Itacest) --BEING REWRITTEN--

A New Hope (Modern! Itacest) --BEING REWRITTEN--

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irl itacest trash By gummydinos Updated Oct 16

I was finishing up my cleaning for the day, after all, I'd have to close the shop soon, when a man walked in. "C-Ciao sir! I'll be with you in just a minute!" I stuttered. I took a moment to look at him. He was very handsome, with his beautiful hazel eyes and lightly tanned skin. He had dark brown hair, and a hair curl, similar to mine. He looked very important, he had a nice button up shirt, and some nice dress pants. His annoyed expression showed I should probably see what he came for instead of just staring at him in a daze. I quickly put my broom back and came to the counter. "H-How can I help you sir?" I stuttered out. Boss hates it when I stutter.. "Just a pack of cigarettes, and how much will that be? I'm kinda in a hurry." He said with an annoyed tone. I quickly got him the cigarettes and smiled at him Warmly. "That'll be just $1.25." He handed me the money and took the cigarettes. "Keep the change." He said flatly, and left. I stared at the door for a moment, just remembering ...

HynixDrowned HynixDrowned Oct 28, 2015
This is good! One tip though, it's all one large lap of text. Maybe you can use an enter when someone speaks. I personally think that reads better.
Mad__Love Mad__Love Oct 13, 2015
Who yeah itacest!!!!!!!!!!!!! Yeah update soon pwease gummy. :)