I SAID I LOVE YOU

I SAID I LOVE YOU

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binka_indian By binka_indian Completed

"What did you say?", he asked with quite surprise and amusement in his tone.
"I love you aadi",i said feebly and weakly.
"WHAT!!!",this time he nearly shouted..with a bit of anger in his voice .
"I SAID I LOVE YOU AADI !! I.....LOVE...YOU(this time i shouted)!Did you here it properly now?", i said.
Suddenly,he started lauging like a maniac..."Did u ever look at your face in the mirror....ohh i forgot! Is your family even able to afford a mirror?how did u even dare to confess to me...if possible dont ever show me ur tramp face again",he said!
"Please...please just...!",i start to plead.
"Leave...NOW!",he shouted and i was in tears!
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It started raining,aadi pinned my hands above my head against the car. He had trapped me, his scent overwhelming my senses. I closed my eyes as he got closer and turned my head away. His lips connected with my jawbone instead, he made the most of it and trailed tiny butterfly kisses down my neck and collarbone. He smiled faintly at my gasp of reaction, he lowered the other one to my face and gently pulled my face to face him. He skillfully closed the gap between us devouring my lips and stealing all my ability to think. Without giving a second thought to what I was doing I arched my body into his and kissed him back.He let go of my trapped hands so his could go other places n i pulled him closer.
"I love you my angel",he said in between the kiss...."what !" ,i asked!.."I SAID I LOVE YOU ANGEL",he replied.
I pushed him with all my force..."Angel Please...just please",he said weakly......"Leave Aadi , NOW", i shouted and turned back..through the side window i could see he had tears in his eyes!!
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#32 in general fiction on 10-11-15

  • family
  • indian
  • love
  • marraige
  • mystery
  • revenge
  • romantic
  • yourstoryindia
u need to improve ur spelling n grammar skills... anywas gud story so far
traawmh traawmh Jul 06
No girl you are wrong self respect should be sacrificed no matter what where there is love there a little EGO could be sacrificed
Hey ur story was brilliant. Pls check out my poems "my soul" and "the tether -in my heart". I hope u will also like my poems
sharmistra sharmistra 7 days ago
Amazing😉i already read ur story two times dear..but i couldnt comment..so here i am😄Awesome story💕AADI💑TARA💕
alexaweston alexaweston May 13, 2016
I don't know but I feel she's like me!!! Seriously, I also do these kind of things!!!
alexaweston alexaweston May 13, 2016
Loved the chappie. I think I got addicted to this book from the very first chapter^_^