To Touch A Seraphs Wing

To Touch A Seraphs Wing

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LaurenForever By LaurenForever Updated Nov 26, 2010

Suzi has been fostered many times and has moved all over the country. She comes to a small town and meets a mismatched group of friends. It turns out that the group has more than one secret up their sleeves. Suzi must conquer an Assemblage of Seraphs and save herself and Ariel - who she is destined to be with. But will she be able to keep her friends and herself alive?

GammaKat GammaKat Jul 06, 2015
This is great, you use great words for imagery. I do ha e a question though, why do they say stood instead of standing? I don't know if its a mistake or just because of where they are from.
LaurenForever LaurenForever Oct 12, 2010
@frakkevin I'm glad you like it :) I will deffo check out your story.  
LaurenForever LaurenForever Oct 12, 2010
@frakkevin I'm glad you like it :) I will deffo check out your story.  
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 11, 2010
Oh come on, you made us read all of that then teased us at the end...I guess that can work as a cliff hanger. I like your writing, and glad she isnt the typical "oh my parents died so I'm going to do drugs and die my hair black" type of kid
                              
                              
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