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The female Alpha

The female Alpha

17K Reads 618 Votes 6 Part Story
Ayumi Johanna Erbeck Habiro By AJEH1708 Updated Nov 06, 2015

Generations and generations,there never was a female Alpha.The reason to that is because werepeople believed that only the males can be Alphas.To me that's sexist. *scoffs* Even Fate thought that too because there never was a female Alpha ever born.So on the the day of September 10th,was the day when Fate changed their mind.

A girl named Artemis Peridot Gray.The first female to be born an Alpha.Her parents thought this to be a change for all.A new age.Unfortunately...Not all agreed with them.

7 years later....When Artemis was supposed to change into her wolf.Nothing had happened.She remained human.So of course,what do you expect would happen to a wolf-less werewolf?She got bullied for her weakness.Beaten up by her classmates.They called her a disgrace.A nothing...So when she was 13,she decided that it had to stop.And so she ran away from her so called pack and became rouge.

5 years later,she returned back to her pack.But,she wasn't that weak girl anymore.

megan_shepherd121 megan_shepherd121 Nov 26, 2016
This is a really great start to a story, makes you wanna carry on
StephanieSmith193 StephanieSmith193 Jul 25, 2016
Wow she ran away at and early age I'm glad that she survived
littleme188 littleme188 Aug 30, 2016
Hmm interesting, the only critics I can give u is to leave spaces in between full stops and the next work like this. Also with comas and maybe try to space out your paragraphs a bit more. Over all a really great start I'm looking forward to reading it good work!! (•ө•)♡
Ltcaine1 Ltcaine1 Jun 01, 2016
You're doing a great job keep up with the good work 😀 😀