The female Alpha

The female Alpha

13.3K Reads 496 Votes 6 Part Story
Ayumi Johanna Erbeck Habiro By AJEH1708 Updated Nov 06, 2015

Generations and generations,there never was a female Alpha.The reason to that is because werepeople believed that only the males can be Alphas.To me that's sexist. *scoffs* Even Fate thought that too because there never was a female Alpha ever born.So on the the day of September 10th,was the day when Fate changed their mind.

A girl named Artemis Peridot Gray.The first female to be born an Alpha.Her parents thought this to be a change for all.A new age.Unfortunately...Not all agreed with them.

7 years later....When Artemis was supposed to change into her wolf.Nothing had happened.She remained human.So of course,what do you expect would happen to a wolf-less werewolf?She got bullied for her weakness.Beaten up by her classmates.They called her a disgrace.A nothing...So when she was 13,she decided that it had to stop.And so she ran away from her so called pack and became rouge.

5 years later,she returned back to her pack.But,she wasn't that weak girl anymore.

This is a really great start to a story, makes you wanna carry on
Wow she ran away at and early age I'm glad that she survived
littleme188 littleme188 Aug 30
Hmm interesting, the only critics I can give u is to leave spaces in between full stops and the next work like this. Also with comas and maybe try to space out your paragraphs a bit more. Over all a really great start I'm looking forward to reading it good work!! (•ө•)♡
Ltcaine1 Ltcaine1 Jun 01
You're doing a great job keep up with the good work 😀 😀