Being 18 and having no parents is hard. Going to an all boys school and being the only girl there is hard. Living with my annoying best friend is hard. But what happens when I fall in love with him..... nothing is hard anymore.
I love the way you write but personally the section about her family I personally would 've made the character quite reserved about it. Or less detail cause these are ppl you've just met. Again I love it and a yeol fan here too.
Wow.. That was mind blowing.. That were so tragic for her ..