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Shane is 15 years old....He was his parents only child unitl recently.  They've adopted a 13 year old girl who seems to be a perfect abomonation.  To Shane at least.  But on the first night she spends something...odd happens...
(This takes place in Barbados)

kimti_aelex kimti_aelex May 13, 2011
serously you have a gift to scare people!!! Awesome!!!
                              
                              I'm scared of the girl!! You have an awesome way of describing things!
                              
                              VOTED
kimti_aelex kimti_aelex May 13, 2011
I am a FAN of horror but tends to avoid it as my imagination tends to run wild and overcomes my thinking! haha
                              
                              reading it.. nice chapter..
                              
                              Voted!
AngusEcrivain AngusEcrivain Jan 30, 2011
@meenie 
                              
                              haha it's all good! You're a talented writer and the odd typo is understandable... we're all guilty of it because our eyes see what we want to see, and none of us want to see mistakes! :D
InkBlackUniverse InkBlackUniverse Jan 30, 2011
@DeathRage yeah thanks lol i dont normall read over what i type up but ive got to start lol
AngusEcrivain AngusEcrivain Jan 30, 2011
This is really good.. you have some serious suspense going on here :) I like it :)
AngusEcrivain AngusEcrivain Jan 30, 2011
A very good first chapter.. very enjoyable! One typo I noticed.. you missed the 'e' from Shane after she asks if she can check out her room too... :D