Dan Avidan x Reader - Fun -

Dan Avidan x Reader - Fun -

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MageStar By MageStar Updated Aug 03

(Warning: I want to test my english so there can be many mistakes!)

(Y/N) is a little animator who is also friends with Ross. She loves to make animations but since a few weeks she has not motivation or whatsoever to make an animation or to draw something which makes her sad. Therefore Ross had the idea that (Y/N) should get out of her comfort zone for a while and visit the grumps with the hope that her motivation comes back. Since (Y/N) is even good friends with Holly she was convinced by them to visit them and is now on the way to hopefully find her motivation again.

You write a lot better than some people whose first language is English! What is your first language?
Just a tip, when you write dialogue you start a new paragraph.
dont worry my first language is Japanese, i understand your pain. English is my last language.
wow this is a very nice story, I don't really see any mistakes so good job :D I know how difficult English can be sometimes
The only thing I saw was 'probably' in the last paragraph, you did amazing!!
aaalive aaalive Dec 16, 2015
With the "you pulled on your hair" part, I don't really know what that was supposed to mean, did you mean like move it out of your face?