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Pen Your Pride
Dan Avidan x Reader - Fun -

Dan Avidan x Reader - Fun -

14.8K Reads 415 Votes 12 Part Story
MageStar By MageStar Updated Apr 15

(Warning: I want to test my english so there can be many mistakes!)

(Y/N) is a little animator who is also friends with Ross. She loves to make animations but since a few weeks she has not motivation or whatsoever to make an animation or to draw something which makes her sad. Therefore Ross had the idea that (Y/N) should get out of her comfort zone for a while and visit the grumps with the hope that her motivation comes back. Since (Y/N) is even good friends with Holly she was convinced by them to visit them and is now on the way to hopefully find her motivation again.

  • avidan
  • dan
  • danavidan
  • danny
  • dannysexbang
  • dansexbang
  • fluffhair
  • fluffy
  • fun
  • funny
  • game
  • gamegrumps
  • grumps
  • internet
  • love
  • reader
  • readerinsert
  • sexbang
I_am_mortal I_am_mortal Jul 31, 2017
You did better than most native English speakers! May I ask what your first language is?
OMFG I LITERALLY HAVE THOS PROBLEM EVERY TIME I GO TO TALK TO SOMEONE 😭😭 your story is amazing though!! I love it already
PawsomeGirl12 PawsomeGirl12 Mar 22, 2017
IM THE NEW DANNY SEXBANG! Or avidan.......BUT I SAY THAT ALL THE TIME TO MY FRIENDS! and I love singing!
LenaAbdyli LenaAbdyli Mar 24
I read in another comment chain that your first language is German, so here we go: Dein Englisch ist sehr gut, es gab zwar hier und da ein paar Fehler, aber Hauptsache man versteht was du schreibst. Die Story an sich ist dir schon bis jetzt fantastisch gelungen, mein Kompliment. ^^
Xreaderfanfiction Xreaderfanfiction Jul 19, 2016
You write a lot better than some people whose first language is English! What is your first language?
aestheticdunfortyler aestheticdunfortyler Apr 24, 2016
Just a tip, when you write dialogue you start a new paragraph.