Gorgeous Guys & Dangerous Girls

Gorgeous Guys & Dangerous Girls

1K Reads 12 Votes 7 Part Story
mikaylaaaa (: By mikaylaa Completed

a story of a girl that likes a taken guy they soon break up. leaving Seth To Sam, well Amber, Seth's ex doesnt like this one bit. Sam and Amber get into a bit of a 'fight' Sam wins and Seth asks Sam on a date something very terrible happens........ Read it to find out what!!

RamirezCindy RamirezCindy Oct 17, 2010
Like I said... add more details...Be more descriptive so the chapters could be longer. For example, you could have descriped a little about how Seth looks and her friend Tess...?
                              Well I don't know... whatever you do is your choice- I'm just saying that this could be better... 
                              Nice chapter.
RamirezCindy RamirezCindy Oct 17, 2010
Hi!!!
                              Umm You could be a little bit more detailed... So the chapters could be longer.
                              And maybe end your sentences when needed to...Like in the second paragraph.
                              Other than that- pretty good start. :D
mikaylaa mikaylaa Oct 11, 2010
sorry for the extra 3rd part , i cant figure out how to delete it . Anyways i hope you all enjoy thiss !! (: <3
KAFrak KAFrak Oct 10, 2010
There's a good cliff hanger, and the writing is also pretty good. I like that you also took time to format
                              
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