Falling hard

Falling hard

807 Reads 8 Votes 2 Part Story
vampiregirl00 By vampiregirl00 Updated Oct 15, 2010

A innocent girl falls for her brothers bff but scared to give it a chance due to his repetation and if she goes for it will he just break her

- - Mar 25, 2011
hey, the story says he's a man whore ...
                              then why didn't those minions attack him and i mean he blushed at a little nudity and seriously no pick up lines or flirting ... :(
BeckyAmber BeckyAmber Dec 11, 2010
You need to slow it down a bit and use capital letters! Its seriously doing my head in!
vsaps3315 vsaps3315 Oct 27, 2010
Could you mayv slow it down plz and more details plzz but it is good :)