When All Falls Sherlock Homes You Wish

When All Falls Sherlock Homes You Wish

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LuvaLuva123 By LuvaLuva123 Updated Oct 14, 2010

Claire McCarthy is fifteen and completly boring. Untill one night her friend Taylor takes her on the night of her life. Claire will be on the run. Chased down by the cops. Meeting the love she never dreamed of. Getting shot at by drug deelers. Gang fights and even solving a twelve year old murder? It all falls on When it All Falls

Studney Studney Mar 21, 2014
Your a great writer. My only suggestion is that went someone is speaking you add "   " around their words. Besides that you have amazing words :D
CloeAnn CloeAnn Oct 26, 2012
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yvy1996 yvy1996 Dec 11, 2010
awesome story !!! PLEASE UPLOAD MORE... oh and use " when somebody talks, this makes it easier to understand.