I Hate YOU Lucas Yale.

I Hate YOU Lucas Yale.

62.1K Reads 918 Votes 12 Part Story
DoubleRainbow By DoubleRainbow Updated Jan 01, 2015

The beauitful, sweet Delilah Johnson, finally joins her brother in an elite boarding school. 

But it doesn't turn out so fantastic as it seems, when her, oh very handsom roommate, Lucas Yale, is a total jerk from the moment she introduces herself. And she is totally clueless, as to why.

Lucas Yale, fallen for Delilah Johnson, as soon as he laid eyes on her. Will he stop being rude, and let himself keep falling for this girl. Or will he brush her aside, like nothing but a pile of dirt.

So stay intune for a bumby ride, for the Love/Hate relationship, of Delilah and Lucas.

jessiesky0 jessiesky0 Jul 10, 2014
you might want to fix that, it's supposed to be you not 'your'
queenxans queenxans Jun 25, 2012
please please please put a cast on this i just really want to see what the twins look like if they are as pretty and attractive as you portrayd them to be
stardust8938 stardust8938 Apr 18, 2011
I love the way that it starts by showing the different POVs in each character love it xxxx
DoubleRainbow DoubleRainbow Apr 02, 2011
@lolo68 Yeah there is a lot of fixing up that needs to be done, but i'll get there (: xx
Patymel Patymel Apr 01, 2011
HI! I don't know if you guys really read this comments but still i think this is FANTASTIC! I love the way you give us both points of views (cuz  seriously sometimes its frustrating not knowing what a guy is really thinking) and I cant wait to keep on reading!
the_harsh_critic the_harsh_critic Mar 15, 2011
I think that you need to edit a lot, but so far so good.  I also notcied that you do the same thing I do, you use 'I' a lot.  I think you justs need to look over it because right now, it just sounds choppy.