Falling for a Criminal

Falling for a Criminal

9.5K Reads 331 Votes 17 Part Story
Madisyn Murray By madimurray2 Completed

Bella Rose loved life and it loved her right back, or so she thought. She had it all. A wealthy and loving family, popular in school, insanely smart, and absolutely beautiful. She would have never of guessed that the night of Prom, which supposedly would be the best night of her life, would change her life forever. Being taken away from her perfect world and put into a horrible frightening one. He was mysterious, he was clever, he was insanely strong, and he was beautiful. But most of all he was a criminal and the leader of one of the most powerful gangs in the U.S. What happens when she finds out the truth about why she was taken?

panda9life panda9life Jun 22
Hey this is just some friendly criticism but,  you might want to combine sentences and use the word "I" less. It helps to make the story flow a little bit better and helps keep the reader interested longer.
pinksugar04 pinksugar04 Apr 01, 2016
Does it make me a bad person if i'm laughing m'y ass off right now ?