A Fractured Echo

A Fractured Echo

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Lou By LouMoran Updated Nov 25

What would you give to be able to erase your history, to start your life over with a clean slate?  For some people this is the stuff of dreams, but for one woman that reality is laced with fear and uncertainty.  Building a new life becomes infinitely harder as events from her past start to weave themselves into the present.
  
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  Copyright © 2015 by Lou Moran. All rights reserved. No part of this document may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic, mechanical, photocopying, recording, or otherwise, without prior written permission of Lou Moran.
  
  This is a work of fiction. All of the characters, organizations, and events portrayed in this novel are either products of the author's imagination or are used fictitiously.

JanetNorcal JanetNorcal Mar 24
Two lifelines, one from Jodie and one from Ruby, how much like a fairytale and yet how based in reality. Some people really do see the best in people ... and if they don't know them, they don't leap to quick cruel judgments. The cafe sounds divine.
Just_Tracey Just_Tracey Jun 07
Amazing first chapter. Addictive reading love that holly got a job in a cake shop
You've hooked me. Glad to see that she's already been offered two lifelines. The café sounds adorable. Looking forward to reading more
Laeaton Laeaton Mar 26
Beautiful writing Lou! There are so many different ways this story can go, I can't wait to see where you take it.  I am glad Holly has Ruby stepping forward to give her a job. I bet she is going to be a friend to Holly too.  Thank you!!❤️
JanetNorcal JanetNorcal Mar 24
Re-reading the prologue again is getting me so excited for the mystery to be unraveled. Why would a person run in front of a car? How do you move beyond isolation? Onward!
redgirlang redgirlang Apr 09
I'm further intrigued now Lou. I can't wait to join in Holly's journey. I absolutely love Jodie and Ruby is so lovely. Looking forward to the next chapter now xx