Just a Look

Just a Look

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mantri_sahiba By mantri_sahiba Updated Jun 27

**********HIGHEST RANK-6 in VAMPIRES***************
  
  Year 0020
  Demons are now the king of the world.
  Vampire community now rules the world.
  
  Everyone has witnessed the massacre of the past decades when these monsters started calling them lords. Those who haven't are too familiar with the story...
  
  
  Meet Aisha
  She is a normal 18 year old from India. And she is normal, maybe.....
  Everyone have their own secrets. But some can be deadly. 
  What is in Aisha that attracts event the emotionless king?
  And how will she react towards her being held hostage by him?
  
  Meet Eric
  As the king of the world and a vampire for a millennium Eric has seen what everyone can't even imagine. But is the king really as emotionless as he seems or he also have his dark secrets, too dark.
  He's attracted to Aisha like a moth to a fly but is Aisha all what he thinks or something more?
  
  It's Just A Look and the life of both changes eternally after all That's All What It Takes
  
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  This is my first story and it may be quite boring int the start but with new chapters it'll pick up speed and quality.
  
  Thanks for Reading

You know that date is in the past not the future? Or do you mean for it to be in the past?
PettiestBitch PettiestBitch Jul 13, 2016
You switched things up and I actually like it cause I usually go for the casual
Meganstyles2-1-94 Meganstyles2-1-94 Nov 06, 2016
I love the way you write but when u get time or if u need some to edit your books I can but you should like write in first person instead to make the reader connect to the character