Kidnapped

Kidnapped

39.8K Reads 438 Votes 15 Part Story
TinkerbellLOVER By TinkerbellLOVER Updated Nov 06, 2012

Melissa Mathews seems to have a perfect life, everyone says so. She has loyal friends, a twin bother who loves her, parents that take good care of her. But under everything, Melissa is afraid that she has so much perfectness. She doesn't like it, it's TOO perfect. She knows that everything comes with a price no matter if you want it or not. She knows something will happen. And it does on a sunny day of July 1st.

Jinx_Mage Jinx_Mage Mar 21, 2012
it would be good if it were longer, but the information was covered well in only a page. :)
Kaidec Kaidec Feb 20, 2012
I love this story! Hope you finish uploading it all soon. I like you am a very impatient person as well. I'm kinda shocked you are in school. You are very talented! Thanks for sharing it with Wattpad. Sorry I don't know anyone who uses this app. If I did I would be sharing this story with them.
RENTAngel RENTAngel Aug 01, 2011
So my name is Melanie and that is soo how I would act if I had a brother :P Good start to the story and can't wait to read more(:
jess64 jess64 Jun 29, 2011
Super cool! Love the story line. Try to watch whether your using past-tense or present-tense. Huge Fan Please keep writing!!!!!!! ;)
FrozenDreams FrozenDreams Oct 10, 2010
um yeah but id photo shop it and put a title (www.picnik.com)
TinkerbellLOVER TinkerbellLOVER Oct 10, 2010
@FrozenDreams oh I forgot to ask you if you liked the pictures I put for the story