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Sparrow By Sparrowheart838 Completed

// Entered into Wattys 2016 //

"It is forbidden for a reason, young one. Love makes you weak, a fraction of yourself. It keeps you from being the best you can be and that is why we must mask it. Ambition, intelligence, strength - now those are qualities that will get you through this harsh life. But being loving, compassionate, kind? Those are the best ways to get yourself killed."

Generations after the Masked Uprising and the fall of StarClan, DarkClan's way of life is no less harsh. Emotions are strictly forbidden and any talk of the Old Life is considered treasonous and punishable by death. It is in this cruel setting that Nightpaw finds himself apprenticed to the only cat with an ounce of freedom: the truth-teller, a cat specifically chosen by the Masked to remember the history of DarkClan.

Yet, Nightpaw doubts the truth in the truth-teller's stories and finds them even harder to reconcile when he is visited by someone he'd been taught no longer exists. Caught between fear and curiosity, the truth-teller's apprentice finds himself stuck between two versions of the Clan's history - two truths where there should only be one.

And he will stop at nothing until the truth is unmasked.

// I have the story rated as teen. Please be warned that there will be a lot of bloodshed and dark matters discussed in this novel.

Cloudstep Cloudstep Nov 15, 2016
A very subtle opening. Its not the strongest, but it's written very well. The description was amazing, by the way.
So_Jaded15 So_Jaded15 Oct 13, 2016
Grrrrr so many people recommended this, why didn't I read it sooner?
- - Jun 24, 2016
This is a great start to a warriors story! 
                              I love the idea for it (My series is going to lead up to something slightly similar... But not the same)
billcipher15 billcipher15 Sep 15, 2016
                              HeatherTAIL created DarkClan for fun.
                              Omg was this on purpose?
twentyoneproblems twentyoneproblems Jul 12, 2016
Goodness me, this is beautiful! First off, the spelling and grammar is well revised and very accurate. The plot is vague, a great attribute to a prologue, and it lingers with action and suspense. Wonderful!
oODuskcryOo oODuskcryOo Jun 20, 2016
This is so good... Is this sorta based off The Giver by Louis Lowry?