When Egil Magnusson moved to his late father's place in rural South Dakota, he was looking forward to peace and quiet. Instead, he finds himself dealing with weird neighbors, old resentments, and an unsolved murder.
I'm reading both your stories because I love your style. As for comments, critiques, I got nothing. I'm going to fly through this, I can tell.
And how did you meet my grandmother to put her in your book? You know she even has that purple purse... :)
Omg that woman. She's doing it again. PLEASE LEAVE HIM ALONE AND GO
Typical nosey neighbours
This was a nice start to your tale. At times the narrative was a bit too casual for me, but besides that this was good. :)
Good, natural sounding dialogue. I know people like that! Like the purple hair description too.
I love this already! Super intriguing and you have a great voice! Such a good intro I can't wait to read more
There's something about Egil, I like him already. Maybe its just the way Donna talks to him or that he wants to keep to himself. I get the feeling Donna is harmless as in not capable of murder etc but probably just a nosy neighbour.