The Kiss

The Kiss

29.8K Reads 1.4K Votes 17 Part Story
KingGzSnow By xXKingGzSnowXx Completed

Evan is a wolf who has come of age to have a mate but when his father the king wolf finds out his mate is not female the war will grow....
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THE KISS

Lovelyjollylocks Lovelyjollylocks Nov 03, 2016
You need to decide on a point of view and apply grammar. It also needs to be more fluid. Promising storyline though
awesomedanie awesomedanie Nov 14, 2015
It a great start you got a little problem with your grammar but pfft who cares awesome start