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The Kiss

The Kiss

35.7K Reads 1.6K Votes 17 Part Story
Snow By TeamSnow4Life Completed

Evan is a wolf who has come of age to have a mate but when his father the king wolf finds out his mate is not female the war will grow....

Lovelyjollylocks Lovelyjollylocks Nov 03, 2016
You need to decide on a point of view and apply grammar. It also needs to be more fluid. Promising storyline though
awesomedanie awesomedanie Nov 14, 2015
It a great start you got a little problem with your grammar but pfft who cares awesome start