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The Luna's cry

The Luna's cry

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panthor4 By panthor4 Updated Dec 15, 2015

Cj was the smallest one in her pack she was pushed around and treated like crap her entire life the alpha didn't like her she was the weak link in his pack and he hated it until he had enough he told his bate James to take her to the border of his land and KILL HER but when shes saved by a fallen angel she's scared  of being rejected by him 

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Nooby_Noob Nooby_Noob Apr 04
I don't mind. My gramma side is being kept at bay. It's still a good storyline
It is good! I just wish for the paragraph to be longer and more spaced out.
macsavage14 macsavage14 Feb 08, 2016
my dear sweet sister you need to finish your books so I can read them all and give you a report on how they are!!!!! hurry
MarlyMonster MarlyMonster Dec 29, 2016
I'd love to read your book because it seems interesting but without basic capitalization and punctuation I really can't, I'm sorry :/
                              Maybe that's something you could get someone to help you with, cuz I really believe your book could be amazing :D
Bonnie12344 Bonnie12344 Feb 27
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ChaniChani9 ChaniChani9 Nov 10, 2016
It's great... just that the full stops of the sentences are needed so that it doesn't look like one long sentence. But otherwise, interesting!