The Scent of Fear

The Scent of Fear

36.9K Reads 3K Votes 35 Part Story
Kerri E. Lorenz By Straw_Stuffer_3 Completed

Mary and her husband are on their way back from a family vacation with their son in the backseat. Both her and her son drift off to sleep as he drives on. he spots a road side stop and pulls in to use the restroom. When marry awakens some time later she can't not find her husband anywhere. She gets out of the car to look around for him and finds more then she bargains for when she discovers what is left of her husband.

  • death
  • fridayreads
  • halloween
  • horror
  • justwriteit
  • spooky
Z12345cutie Z12345cutie Aug 24
Maybe he was lacking the quality or quantity required; insufficient for a purpose.
_Silent_whispers_ _Silent_whispers_ Nov 27, 2016
Lmao Mary and David are a cute couple. This chapter is REALLLLLY interesting and I'm gonna keep reading but, some parts throughout the chapter need some commas and periods :-)
- - Dec 23, 2016
I feel David's pain. Halloween gives me the hibby jibbies lol
irtezazam irtezazam Aug 19, 2016
Thanks for writing a third person story. me and I In a story annoyes me alot. :p
ObsidianCrossbow17 ObsidianCrossbow17 Nov 15, 2015
I love the ending of this chapter:D
                              Just a writing-nerd question-
                              Did you put the fact that Timothy was quiet to add suspense, or for some foreshadowing?
GermanOmma GermanOmma Oct 24, 2015
My grand kids call me omma, I like the start of this book wish one of my grandkids would have said my name first